Monday, July 18, 2011

Critique my opening, please?

OMG. My eyes literally started watering. This sounds so sad, but definitely something i would read. So Grayson is gay? That's interesting, and a good twist, even if its the beginning. I really want to read more. Its like it pulled me right into the scene. And just as another commenter said, maybe you should make it a little more obvious that the main character is a boy.

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